Dragonia Mechina: A Dragon Fanfic: Plot

Okay, so for a while now I have thought about this idea for my story. it is the year 2130, the Earth's forests are still in place granted there are larger civilizations and the sort. There are a total of only 200 cities on the earth, years after many wars calming the countries down most of the cities were destroyed, but, those ruins are covered in plant life and the forest. Dragons have remained hidden through an alternate realm, still in the past, humans in that realm began to take over, enslaving and killing the great beasts. Humans from the future realm discovered the great portal and saw this action and had great pity for the beasts, knowing what they were going through, the humans came up with an idea. To set things right for both worlds, they created great mechanical beings known as Dragonia Mechina, Mechanical/Robot Dragons. Being given the minds of soldiers and the such, each Mechina has been given one task: to stop the alternate humans from killing the dragons and drive them back into fear. The Mechina understood, but one had malfunctioned with a virus and the brain as well, driving the Mechina insane, it infected most of the others as well, forcing the portal closed and destroying the world they were born in. Very few had survived the onslaught, but those who had survived had created the Mechina in secret, there are only ten of the allied Mechina, the story is about one of them known as Kyoto. Kyoto-06 may not be the largest, not the strongest nor fastest, but he knew to do anything to get the job done. With a new war on the horizon, Kyoto and his crew begin their assault on the Ex-Mechina, doing what it takes to stop them from destroying all of man, and beast.


So, what do you fellas think of it? I'll have characters up soon, but I can take requests from others for their characters to be in the story if they'd like?

That sounds awesome! Once it comes out, i'll join.

If you have any ideas just tell me so and the such, I am still working out character ideas (which will be A LOT) and how things will truly play out, and @ the moment I am working on another story, so it may take a bit for me to start on this. As for characters, like I said I am in the works, if you have ideas just throw them at me.

i got an idea. I've tried a idea of draco to expand his character and failed, and this is that the spirit who got draco got another mechanica to make him crazy from all of the power and insanity of the spirits brethren dying, so it makes that spirit had came onto the other ones and infected them with the insanity it has. But the only one who is immune to it is the last mechanicas still active, and Draco (if i can add him, that is) knows about this evil and will help by letting the spirit go inside him. i hope you like the idea, because that is a good idea of what i would say, and will expand the horizon of the plot.
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Um, well I had something similar to it, while the primary antagonists are the Mechina's there was going to be detail in the story of how they went crazed. I liked the idea you had, but I already had something in mind. If you could come up with something that would be great:
Ideas I already had and each chapter gives a very brief description of something, kind of like a back of a movie case:
Chapter one: The creation of the Mechina's had began and are on a test run
Chapter two: Mechina's get into action
Chapter three: Mechina's are infected

That is all I am giving, three out of god knows how many chapters.