Tinuvel, The Curious Nightwing Hatchling

Type of Character: Dragon  
Link to Character List Page: I will when I figure out how. Please help.
Personal Info
Name: Tinuvel
Alias: The Wandering Shadow or, Nightingale
Age: 6
Gender: Female    
Personality: Tinuvel is a curious Nightwing. She loves to wander into the forest, indulging all the sounds she hears and the scents she smells. It is not like her to get cranky or be a chump, unless she doesn't feel good (illness), or doesn't get enough rest. She is interested in humans and wants to learn more about them when she is older. She will find some in the woods sometimes, and study them (study the looks, where their hair is, and the eye color (She is to little to do actual experiments and document their behavior.)
Fears: She fears for her life and what people think about her. She thinks thoughts like, "What will I do in training when I become a Trainee?" and, "Will they think of me as inferior, or unique?"    
Strengths: She is highly intelligent (for her age). She has also learned to be "Quick-Footed", which means that she is fast at getting away. She developed this skill in the forest to keep hidden from her tribe, (so she won't get in trouble) and other, hostile tribes lurking about.
Weaknesses: She is not good at battling, due to her friendly personality. She has problems making friends, because most think she is a weirdo. She runs to the forest where she isn't hurt by her tribe-mates.

General Appearance
Height: 13 feet
Scales: Her scales are a deep, dark, gray-black.
Eyes: As white as the Moon in the sky.
Appearance: I wish I could describe more thoroughly that she wears nothing. She has horns that curve upwards, and a few spines on her back. Her wings are a lighter gray-black than her scales, but not by much.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Nightwings
Inheritance: 100% pure Nightwing blood
Rank: Hatchling
Family: Deceased
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: She can blend into the shadows and breathe a sleeping gas. She practices her gas's strength, so it is decently powerful (Not that good, because she is a hatchling).
Special Abilities: She can hide as a shadow for short time periods (Around 5-6 seconds). She gets extremely tired after she appears again. This skill will grow stronger as she ages. People will be able to tell if she is in their shadow, because the shadow will look exactly like her shadow, Shorter and has curled horns. To get her out, smack the ground. This should cause pulsing and shaking, thus forcing er to leave. If she is smacked, she will take damage. an be use every 5 posts.
Combat Style: She will hide among the shadows (Not in them, among them).  She will try to land blows as they near the shadows to look for her. She will not hide as
a shadow, for it is too tiring.

Background
History:

Hatching

A normal, ordinary Nightwing egg, was laid in the shadows of the hatchery. It seemed to soak up the shadows, like the roots of a plant soaking up the water droplets on the surface. She was given her special powers from the shadows. She hatched with her horns curved upward, and a misshapen snout. Everyone thought she was a weirdo ever since her hatching. No ones mind ever seemed to change. It was devastating to her, then and now.

The Forest

One rainy day, she looked outside. She saw a beautiful forest with colors of all kinds. The trees waved for her to join them. The animals beckoned for her to go. Her heart pleaded to be there. It screamed "Freedom" to her. Freedom from the teasing, from the hatred, from the scornful looks of er fellow Nightwings. It was an offer that she couldn't turn down. This started the frequent trips to the forest.

The Present

The teasing never seemed to stop. It was like people were hating her ten times as more the next day. She tried to ignore them, but she just can't. She hides in the shadows, covering her face full of tears, cold and dark. She escapes more frequently now. It still hurts, nonetheless.

Is this still a WIP?

Hello, my name is Hydra, im one of the character mods here, besides help with the character registration is your app ready for review?

Underneath the Character Creation catagory there is another catagory called Character Registration. But we can work on this once your character is approved. Thanks for joining the site!

I'm ready for review and corretions!

Okay, lets start by organizing things a little bit here. In the personality section, you mention one of your primary abilities, which isnt listed in the ability section. However Im not entierly sure if this is going to be allowed, im asking about it now.

Also, you have your weaknesses and strengths just underneath.

For fears, i would make what you mentioned more specific, and i think you need up to two or three.

Make sure you quote what you have changed.

Hydra wrote:Okay, lets start by organizing things a little bit here.  In the personality section, you mention one of your primary abilities, which isnt listed in the ability section.  However Im not entierly sure if this is going to be allowed, im asking about it now.

Also, you have your weaknesses and strengths just underneath.

For fears, i would make what you mentioned more specific, and i think you need up to two or three.

Make sure you quote what you have changed.

Oh yes, I forgot! The character creation guide posted by Baldirak Sapiens Draco (Might spell it wrong) didn't post anything on full gods besides the lifespans and what are exclusive to them. What do you have to do to be qualified for a full god creation? I was just wondering.

I will fix my errors!

Well if you're new to the site, it would be a good idea, if and when youve been roleplaying for a while to build up Dragon Points or DP. You can create a character like this if you have enough DP, and if they have a full god or goddess character available. Same goes for demis and semis.

Tbh, i understand, i wanted a full god character when i first joined too and i still dont have one yet. But yeah just roleplay a bunch and youll get points you can spend later on.

Was there anything eles you had questions with?

Hello there! This is a list for the things you can obtain with DP. (Ignore the AP for now because I'm reworking it and it's more for Tribe Leaders) http://www.rpgdragons.org/t4803-guide-to-dp-ap-and-wp-part-of-the-dp-revamp?highlight=revamp

As you'll see, you cannot obtain a full god with DP. Full god positions are given out by staff. Typically, the only real requirement is that you have been an active member of the site for a good long time and have a good understanding of what is and isn't allowed with your characters here. Full god positions may also be  rewarded for winning a contest. We try to do contests often, but it depends how active the majority of the site is.

One other thing about your app that Hydra might have missed is that under Tribe, you should put which Tribe your character is going to be in (if they aren't a Rogue). so instead of EarthWing/LightWing, just put one or the either or whichever Tribe you intend to be in. And if you are going to be in a Tribe, you need to put your character's rank. You can find the most common/starter ranks in the Guide, of course. Also, you may only have one special ability for now, as this is a new character.

Shoot, I think that was the rule before unless im mistaken, my bad Baldirak.

I have decided to make it a Nightwing instead. Is this big change allowed? I want to be a different dragon, but still have the name Tinuvel (Plus it fits more as a Nightwing name because it means night as a baby name or something related).

Yes. You can change your character in any way at any time. Just note that once that character has been approved, once you start roleplaying with them, everything that happens to the character in RPs: things they've said, done, had done or said to them, etc. cannot be changed, as that is part of the character's history, and changing your character's history isn't allowed.

Changed it! How's this?

How do you get DP? I was just wondering.

http://www.rpgdragons.org/t4803-guide-to-dp-ap-and-wp-part-of-the-dp-revamp?highlight=revamp

I changed it. hows this?

Sorry,wrong alt

Still Tinuvel though!

Please don't double or triple post. If you need to add something to a post you just made, you can edit it.

Just need a little clarification on your special ability. When you say she can hide as a shadow, what does it look like? For example, if she were hiding near a tree, would she appear to be the shadow of that tree, or would she look like a random, out-of-place shadow? Basically, could someone tell something is off about the shadow, or would they be fooled? Also, you forgot to put her rank.

Okay, thanks for the feedback, I fixed what I could!

Approved!!