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Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
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Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))

Link to Character List Page: http://www.rpgdragons.org/t5429-hydrangea-s-characters#66265
Personal Info
Name: Hydrangea
Alias: The Plant Whisperer, Forest Dweller
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Personality: Hydrangea is a humorous and cunning Lightwing. She loves to laugh. She tells jokes a lot of the time. She also enjoys using sarcasm. She is good at snooping around, and spying (Possibly only in forests so that she can blend in). She also loves sniffing the flower on her tail. She personally likes to call herself a botanist.
Fears: She is afraid of fire. She is a lonely dragon in the forest. One plume of fire could burn down her home. She also fears predatory animals (such as lions, eagles, etc.). Even though she could kill them easily, she knows they still can hurt her badly.
Strengths: She is cunning. She can easily trick dragons with traps and such. She is very sly, and can sneak around without being seen.
Weaknesses: Hydrangea is not the strongest dragon. She loses almost every match she is forced to be in. She is also weak to fire. She is a plant like dragon, so she can burn pretty easily. Lastly, she can not fly very well. She has no wings, but can still fly. Because she has no wings, she can't fly very well.
General Appearance
Height: 43 (How tall your dragon is)
Scales: She doesn't have scales, but instead has fur. Her fur is purple, with yellow circles by her cheeks.
Eyes: A gross looking pink. She has them closed when ever she has company.
Appearance: Hydrangea has purple fur, with leaf looking things sicking out of her tail. She has six legs instead of four. The flower at the end of her tail emits a sweet smell. She has yellow horns that curve forwards and up. She has six ears (three coming out of each side of her head). She also has whiskers.
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Rogue
Inheritance: 100% Lightwing
Rank: Rogue
Family: She doesn't know and doesn't care. She is to busy laughing her head off. N/A
Mate: Not interested in mating so, N/A
Hatchlings: N/A
Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: She can shoot condensed light beams, and change her fur color. She may only be the colors of normal Hydrangeas (Purple, pink, etc.). She enjoys being purple the most.
Special Abilities: She can emit a field of light. This field covers about 5 feet around her. Anyone who steps in will be blinded for 5-6 seconds. The field of light lasts only about 9-10 seconds. Can be used every five posts.
Combat Style: She will hide among the bushes, then leaps onto them, landing some blows before jumping away to hide again. She prefers not to fight in general.
Background
History: Her egg was laid in the forest and ditched there. After she hatched, she wandered the forest. Then, she found a plant that turned out to be parasitic. It wrapped around her tail, turning her bright shades of purple (Yes the plant affected all of her body, not just her tail). The blossom of the parasitic plant can be seen at the end of her tail. Now, she prefers to go about her business.
RP Sample: No thanks
Last edited by Hydrangea on Sat May 04, 2019 2:50 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
You need to have some weaknesses. Also, it is not necessary to make a new character list everytime you make a new character. You just add your new character to the list once it has been approved. So I'm going to delete one of your lists in Character Registration.
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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
Okay, I fixed what I could, please criticize me more!

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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
Oh, how big of an area does her light field cover?
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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
I fixed it! How's this?

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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
So the light field can blind whoever steps in it for 5-6 seconds, covers an area of five feet around her, and lasts for 9-10 seconds. Considering she is a full LightWing, you could actually make the durations and area larger, if you want to. However, on top of being able to do this, it can also half the damage of ranged attacks by all species except NightWings and FireWings? Even if the field only lasts for up to 10 seconds (assuming you don't increase the duration) that seems a little much, since the primary purpose of the ability is to blind anyone who gets too close. So if the field is nothing more than light, how is it able to half the damage of ranged attacks?
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Re: Hydrangea, The Cunning Lightwing Rogue (Ready For Review!))
Fixed, more criticism please!

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